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Sam Powell

Bottles
Bottles by @MadameHotaru (Sam Powell)

Everybody needs to practice on something still lol. This is what I chose for a motif. On paper the image has an additional bottle but I cropped it out due to its unfinished/rough look. This drawing is one that I'd really like to see comments concerning technical aspects on. Porportion, shading, etc.

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20y224d ago
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Posted: Saturday, 10 April, 2004 @ 07:37 PM

I really think the two taller bottles look great, and the shorter one does too, but it could use a more rounded bottom. Otherwise, cool! I don't want to comment on the shading, because I know it looks different on paper than it does on my moniter, but it looks pretty good to me, exept the bottom of the shortest bottle looks a bit too dark. But again, it could just be the computer. All in all, I think you've done a really great job! ^_^

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