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Finally.....
Finally..... by @Raven (Raven Illusion)

Here's my long overdue part of chickie6's request of her kougra Mvua. The body looks somewhat decent and I tried a new style of arranging text. The background bugs me though, it's just too......green.... Artwork © Copyright 2003 Lunasia Z.

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Posted: Wednesday, 05 March, 2003 @ 03:43 PM

Hey! I love the pic! You're getting so awesome at kougras. I must agree about the background though. It's a good bg but is a bit too greenish. I do have a suggestion if you don't mind. I was thinking that the back part of the green behind the grass could be made into a mountain or something. That might help it be a little less green........lol. Hope that helps ya! And Great pic!!

Posted: Wednesday, 05 March, 2003 @ 03:43 PM

Hey! I love the pic! You're getting so awesome at kougras. I must agree about the background though. It's a good bg but is a bit too greenish. I do have a suggestion if you don't mind. I was thinking that the back part of the green behind the grass could be made into a mountain or something. That might help it be a little less green........lol. Hope that helps ya! And Great pic!!

Posted: Saturday, 03 January, 2004 @ 07:13 PM

I love the way you draw your felines! And the markings on this one is really cool, great job! XD

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