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Luz Gilmour

Reach Out For The Sunrise
Reach Out For The Sunrise by @Floydean (Luz Gilmour)

put your hands into the big sky... I thought of a dream I had, that I was floating in the air like if I was swimming, then I drew the crystal because the position she is in was like she was reaching someting or i dunno... hahaha

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Rating:
Teen (N)
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Finished Work
Submitted:
18y108d ago
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Posted: Friday, 04 August, 2006 @ 05:46 PM

Nice work, but I think the arms look a bit stiff. Also I think you should change the rating to Teen for nudity. ;-)

Posted: Sunday, 06 August, 2006 @ 03:52 PM

you're right!! thanx! I just see it as innocense, so I focused on the rest of the drawing, hands and eyes, didn't take notice of the lil nudity hehe

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