@porifra
pori fra

Bordom
Bordom by @porifra (pori fra)

I did this one when I was really bored. this is on the back of my agenda book the school gave me - hence the paper color. the left one was the original, and I did that in one day. the eyes came out bigger than I intended and it now looks like the bird in the Petshop of Horror.. the one on the right I did few days later and it took two or three days since I wansn't that bored. but I think her face came out better. in case you haven't noticed, they're supposed to be some kind of Thai dancer.

Category:
Rating:
Everyone
Class:
Rough / Concept
Submitted:
20y353d ago
Tags:
None
Other Work By @porifra

Comments & Critiques (2)

Preferred comment/critique type for this content: Any Kind

Posted: Thursday, 04 December, 2003 @ 09:36 AM

i was drawn to this thumbnail as it resembles an original antique charcoal drawing from Indonesia that my wife bought and now it hangs in our living room...but yes I can see the similarity to Thai tradition...you should do more of this work...you have a talent for the detailing in costume and the accentuating of body language to show grace in movement.

Posted: Friday, 05 December, 2003 @ 06:34 PM

Wow, I must say I really luv this pic. Their costumes are incredibly detailed. It's amazing! I do agree that the eyes on the left girl are a too big. I luv the hair on the girl on the right though. Great job!

Leave a Comment

You must be logged in and have an Active account to leave a comment.
Please, login or sign up for an account.

What kind of comments is porifra seeking for this piece?

  • Any Kind - Self-explanatory.
  • Casual Comments - Comments of a more social nature.
  • Light Critique - Comments containing constructive suggestions about this work.
  • Heavy Critique - A serious analysis of this work, with emphasis on identifying potential problem areas, good use of technique and skill, and suggestions for potentially improving the work.
Please keep in mind, critiques may highlight both positive and negative aspects of this work, but the main goal is to constructively help the artist to improve in their skills and execution. Be kind, considerate, and polite.