Thank you for the feedback. :)
I plan on purchasing a book on drapery and folds in the near future to help me with the bed sheets. I'll definitly keep in mind the highlighting tips for next image as well.
Carrie's Seductive Pose by @digoraccoon (Diosden Rodriguez)
A seductive pose of my feline gypsy rogue Carrie. While I think the pose is well done and the coloring is good, I do need training on the folds of bed sheets. I will definitly look into possible study methods for the next one. Prints will be available for sale, email me for details.
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This is absolutely adorable! I think you've rendered the pose extremely well--it's so catlike, quite fuzzy and seductive. (Did I just use 'fuzzy' and 'seductive' in the same sentence???) I think you've done a pretty good job on the folds around her body--I think the only improvement would be to add more folds overall. Also, you might want to try to make them a little 'stiffer'--straighter, angular lines give the impression of harder sheets. Right now, these sheets seem to be incredibly soft--which also might have been the look you were going for, ne? The way the mattress bends down with her torso makes it seem very foamy--again, not the usual bed material, but far from being extraordinairy or wrong.
The coloring is absolutely something to be proud of, your shadows in particular are amazing. I think your highlights, especially on her fur, could be a little bit brighter, right now, they almost blend in a little too much. But the soft brushes you've used to add them gives the impression of gentle lighting--just the type to be found in a bedroom.
Overall--great job! I'll look forward to seeing your next ones!