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Lainey Burton

Lost Dream
Lost Dream by @lainburt (Lainey Burton)

something i did for the weekly challenge this week ^-^

http://mb.side7.com/viewtopic.php?p=37734#37734

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Posted: Friday, 10 October, 2003 @ 09:19 AM

I just wanted to say that this is SO SO neat and wonderfully done. I love the surreal quality of the perspective and colors.. It's awesome. :)

Posted: Friday, 10 October, 2003 @ 09:51 AM

Ooo! Superfun perspective, and once again--your colors rock! I'd like to see a bit more contrast on the girl's head, 'cos again--compared to the darks and lights in the background, she looks flat.

(Incidentally, if you ever want to paint a painting within a picture--say, on the wall or so--that's the way to go; within the minipainting itself, keep the contrast low, far-apart from the rest of the image.)

But anyway! Thanks for sharing, I love your work!

Posted: Friday, 10 October, 2003 @ 04:55 PM

hmmm yer right about the contrast hehe does look a bit flat...hmmm so i added some and it looks a bit better ^-^

also added a few lil paintings in the pic too, makes it look more interesting :D

Posted: Friday, 10 October, 2003 @ 10:22 PM

Oo! Those little additions really add a nice touch!

Posted: Thursday, 27 November, 2003 @ 10:03 PM

Oo, neato! I think this is one of my favorite images of yours! Absolutely stunning.. I like how the staircase sort of fades away into the dark. Looks sort of like stars... Hm. Is that a fire place peeking out at the bottom? Hard to tell... This image is great! It really makes the viewer ponder!

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