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Kuo's Birthday Gift
Kuo's Birthday Gift by @migucast (Miguel Castaneda)

Quick birthday gift for Kuo-Shinigami whose birthday comes around on the 10th.

And yes. I know the arms look weird... I'm trying here.. ;_;

Background is cut from a photo on South Beach we took at the end of our honeymoon.

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Posted: Wednesday, 11 February, 2009 @ 08:46 AM

The arms are just a bit thin; put some meat on them and they'd be just fine.

The facial proportions seem a little odd too, while we're on the subject. Her eyes could be a bit lower, is all. The rest of the figure looks great. ^^ She blends in really well with the background, too.

Happy Birthday, Kuo. ;)

Posted: Wednesday, 11 February, 2009 @ 09:53 PM

Well, I was trying some foreshortening but I guess they're still too thin even for that.

A little lower...? Maybe... :\

Thanks, though.

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