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DYOS 12: At Plot's End

Privateering, Revisited
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Privateering, Revisited by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My second submission to DYOS XII. [link]

Since he didn't get his promised slot in XI, he's got some catching up to do... :icontrollfaceplz:

In response to the X.ii–XI parallel run, I'd adopted the policy of keeping characters in one thread or the other; hence Thorvald only appears in canon in Part II, Peter in The HAAAX, and Rudolph literally crosses between them. Here, though, I chose to break that rule, as I couldn't think of any other (pre-existing) character other than Gedeonin that could fit the role.

Captain Locke © D.C. Simpson;
Kirill Gedeonin © me.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt January 2014.]

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