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DYOS 12: At Plot's End

NegaDYOS: We Fight for Peace
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NegaDYOS: We Fight for Peace by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My 19th submission to DYOS XII: [link]
See original post for musical cues.
Oh yeah, this was made in 2010...

One of the things that got me about the original page was how little the commentators actually commentated the fight. While this was (and in several ways remains) CG's most ambitious comic action-wise, the wide shots and somewhat stilted posing make it read much slower than intended. Just throwing some observational text into the copious blank space (see previous comic) works wonders on the flow. Taken together it made one of the comics I hated the most into probably the most fun to rewrite.

P.S.: Always bet on Duke.

Original comic by @GenMarshall; special guest appearance by gay_Aleks from IOT.

Originally submitted to DeviantArt October 2017 as a PNG; converted to lossy WebP to fit the file size cap. See original post for full fidelity.

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