The beach

The beach: part 10 (end)
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The beach: part 10 (end) by @Trezce (Lev)

The end of this very short story. This is how this girl will get involved in the affairs of a very unfortunate princess. 

Story, art and characters made by me. 

To understand this story I recommend to check my serial of my webcomic Espero 😊

Pd. Thank goodness the snake didn't got his way or the comic would turn in a pretty 18+ one and I'm not fond of that :,v 

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Posted: Thursday, 17 October, 2024 @ 05:18 AM
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I'm so happy the snake didn't get his way too 😭😭 I was in suspense the whole time, it seems the girl has found her way into Espero!! really excited to see how her first meeting with Calipso will happen 🙏

Posted: Friday, 18 October, 2024 @ 12:31 PM
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@animal4kHD: thanks so much for taking your time to read my story, I really appreciate your feedback  ♥️♥️♥️♥️

Right now I'm working on the script of the next part. ♥️♥️♥️

Certainly their meeting will be relevant for the two ♥️

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