OK, I've been out of human drawing for the LONGEST time, and my anatomy has gone down hill...FAST.

Redline me please?

I photoshoped it, instead of finishing the drawing in oekaki (got frusturated over lineart) and this is what I got:

Still red line me! I know the arms are messed up (they are completley different lengths) so if someone knew how to straighten that out, that would be great

Sorry, too lazy to redline, but I'm happy to offer tips, anyway. Personally, I think the anatomy for the most part is fine. The dress obviously helps to hide a good bit of her body and what's showing looks okay to me.

You're on the right track for the head, just need some more curves in there. What I find helps me do a profile is to start with a very light line curving inward from the nose and have the mouth and chin follow that line. The lips come out a little bit, of course, and so does the chin, but you want a slight indentation between the lower lip and chin. Also, bring in the outline of her head above the nose right at eye level just a little.

I don't have much in my own gallery to show by way of example, but you can get an idea of what I'm going for in this image. (As a warning, there is slight nudity in the image.)

Hope this helps.