@SagaWolf
Louise Jørgensen

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For a long, long time I have been playing with the idea of a comic. It was to be drawn in TLK style, since I love that style to death^_^ I finished the first page and then went dead. I have no clue how to continue, but hopefully I'll soon find out. I've got tons of concept art that I'll upload later.

Man what a pain the red text was! I'm not even sure if I should keep it red or not...

I sure hope the winged creatures’ colors are as dead and lifeless as they are suppose to be. I spend a long time searching for dead, boring, lifeless colors.

I am sooooooo please with the eyes! Green godly-goodness !! Again I would really really appreciate comments! Anything to help me improve!

'And there was much rejoicing.... Yaaaayyy...'

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