Scooby Doom: Iron Charlie
Scooby Doom: Iron Charlie by @Eternity9

Scooby Doom: Iron Charlie

So I turned Charlie the robot into an Iron Valiant, but without its arm spikes. (He's also is male unlike other Iron Valiant that are genderless, if I were to dive more into what Charlie is, he's either considered a proto-type or defective/mutant)

I didn't really think too hard on what to make Charlie into, A Iron Valiant worked perfectly for what I needed for this design and for what the character could do.

I think if I were to rewrite this episode into the Scooby Doom AU, I would almost completely scrap the original Scooby Doo episode story and make a whole new one for this. For starters I would have that Charlie was found broken and injured by the workers at the Nimbasa city Amusement Park. No one knows where he came from, but after being nursed back to health, Charlie chose to stay at the park and was even given a name by the Amusement Park owner. Charlie is very happy to be working at the park and helping out around the place, his presence has also brought new interest to the park as people want to see this strange new Pokemon.

One of those people interested to see Charlie is Velma, having read a book/magazine that had described a similar Pokemon in it.

When the gang arrive, they find the park has been closed down for maintenance as their has been a string of accidents recently and people are starting to blame Charlie as he's been sighted in the same area as these incidents.

(I would also like to figure out how to include Gym Leader Elesa into the story. Scooby Doo loves having its cameos and Scooby Doom Au is the same!)

After the gang investigate it would be revealed that what's actually causing trouble around the Amusement Park is an Iron Bundle.

(Reason I choose Iron Bundle is because of the episode name/title 'Foul Play in Funland' a typical Pokemon episode would replace Foul with Fowl for the pun, thus I decided I needed a bird to be causing trouble)

I then could have a cool battle of Iron Bundle VS Iron Charlie with support from the gang and Elesa, maybe more Paradox Pokemon are now showing up through mysterious portals and need to be pushed back.

The ending for this story is hard one for me to decided, so I'll leave it up to you guys, in the final moment as the hero's have managed to fight back the future Paradox Pokemon the last one remaining being Iron Charlie. Should Iron Charlie also choose to go through the portal to where he came from? or should Iron Charlie be aloud to stay and continue his life at the park?. I want to know what people would pick and which ever gets the most votes would be the 'canon' ending for Iron Charlie.

A) Iron Charlie Leaves

B) Iron Charlie Stays


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