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Daisy Hunt

Breakdown
Breakdown by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

A scene from my on-going drama fic Breakdown, in which Vodka catches Gin when the latter can no longer fight the sedative with which he was injected. At the beginning of the fic, Vodka found Gin badly emotionally and mentally damaged after he was tortured for several weeks by Dr. Portman, and throughout the chapters two stories are told: flashbacks of what happened to Gin when Portman had him, and how he's dealing with it in the present time. Because of these particular characters' relationship with each other, this is very different from any other fic of the kind that I've ever written.

Rated for violence because of the welts on Gin's shoulder and chest, and because Vodka's sleeve is slashed from Gin attacking him with a knife in his crazed state.

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