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take it back
take it back by @marla (marla deepali)

this is from "the clan" where akane becomes a vampire. its a pretty good fic, except for the lemon chapter, which i found just a tad unecessary. just a tad. anyway, this scene is ranma shouting at akane because he's pissed off that she willingly became a vampire.

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