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Valerie Sloan

Sitar - Siran & Shyakon
Sitar - Siran & Shyakon by @sultansgirl (Valerie Sloan)

Here I have two different linearts. The top one of the wolf growling is Sitar, Shy's father. One of my few attempts at a growling wolf. Comments?

The second is of Siran the pack's pupsitter saving young Shyakon from death. This one has a lot of problems that I am just having trouble pinpointing. The pup itself bothers me. Suggestions?

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Furry / Anthropomorphic
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