Random Girl by @trust_in_angels (Christine Fitzgerald)

I'm planning on coloring this, but I'd appreciate any tips on what to change and what looks awkward. I uploaded this because I'm afraid that I'll totally mess it up, and I want another copy.

She's based off of this lady is a Lasik (laser eye surgery) ad. She looks kinda Asian, which is fine but it wasn't what I wanted. Does anyone know how I can fix this without erasing too much?

I hope I'll be proud of this picture.

Thanks for viewing! Can't wait for any comments!