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Luz Gilmour

Don't Speak
Don't Speak by @Floydean (Luz Gilmour)

I plucked a knife on your back, but I had plucked one in my heart first... I'm so sorry... I cannot forgive myself.. then how can I ask you for forgiveness?

"you and me, we used to be together, everyday together, always... I really feel, that I'm losing my best friend, I can't believe this could be, the end... It looks as though, you're letting go, And if it's real, well, I don't want to know..."

I've done the worst thing I could have done, but I finally found out what I feel for you... I wouldn't forgive you for forgiving me... I'm sorry my paper boy,... for making you bleed again... For promissing I would never hurt you...

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Teen (N)
Class:
Rough / Concept
Submitted:
16y269d ago
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