Dual's Markings by @FireyWolve (Dual Qyrineg)

Just the markings for one of my characters for my story. I'm in the progress of making the site for it, but I have one of the chapters up so if you want to read it, go:

http://obit.homestead.com/obit.html

If you don't want to read it, I'd still LOVE it if you'd tell me how my site's coming along. I'm very serious about this story, and I want comments about it, good and bad.