@RaptorPupil

October 26th, 2024

Tooniverse

The scene opens to a large house at night and we see the world’s counterpart of Hirsch sneaking out of the building with Daisy; Daisy is a white-colored fluffy foal that’s in the art style of G4 My Little Pony. As Hirsch promises to Daisy that they’ll escape this time we learn that the two have been held captive by an abusive man named David for over a month, we also learn that David has a large ravenous poodle that’s essentially his enforcer. Hirsch makes it to the backyard and he tells Daisy that he’s going to put her down on the other side of the fence after he distracts the poodle, as Hirsch pulls out some raw meat he sees that David’s poodle has arrived. Hirsch throws the raw meat at the poodle and as the dog eats the meat Hirsch gently puts down Daisy on the other side of the fence, before Hirsch can climb the fence he gets pulled down by the poodle. Hirsch believes that it’s better this way and he starts yelling for Daisy to run, the fluffy foal then reluctantly runs away as Hirsch gets mauled by the poodle.

Daisy starts running towards the nearest house and she ends up bumping into Terry and his hero team, meanwhile a bloodied Hirsch has escaped the poodle’s grasp and has picked up a large branch that he found so he can fight back against the dog. Hirsch goads the poodle into attacking him and before the dog can hurt Hirsch again it gets shot to death by Terry, much to Hirsch’s joy he sees that Terry and his hero team have arrived. Hirsch starts embracing Daisy and as the man thanks the heroes for what they’ve done David arrives to see what’s going on, David recognizes the heroes and before he can run back into his house he gets stopped by Rupert (who sets his pants on fire). Terry and his hero team receive praise for their heroic deed and we also learn that David has been arrested for holding Hirsch and Daisy captive, Terry then gives Hirsch the offer to join his hero team but the man declines as he wants to properly raise Daisy in a safe home.

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