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Fangie Of The Forests

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Finished serena by @Fangwolf (Fangie Of The Forests)
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Coming out of my cage And I've been doing just fine Gotta gotta be down Because I want it all

It started out with a kiss How did it end up like this? It was only a kiss It was only a kiss

Now I'm falling asleep And she's calling a cab While he's having a smoke And she's taking a drag

Now they're going to bed And my stomach is sick And its all in my head But she's touching his chest now

He takes off her dress now Let me go And I just can't look its killing me And taking control

Jealousy turning saints into the sea Swimming through sick lullabye Choking on your alibis But its just the price I pay Destiny is calling me Open up my eager eyes 'Cos I'm Mr Brightside

(Twice, then...)

I never I never I never I never

like that sonG??i luv it...

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