Don't leave me
Don't leave me by @Trezce (Lev)

Translation:

"Oh, Dolores, I would die without you. Please don't ever leave me"

Just a study of a non cannon scene with two characters of mine who are part of a personal comic project. These are Dolores and Herman. It is quite a long story, but in short, Herman is an emotionally damaged man and Dolores got close to him in an attempt to help him overcome his pain, just to realize this is way too much a task to take. 

At first these two become friends and Dolores always sees Herman as such, but he slowly acts less than a friend and more like a husband, abusing she has a hard time setting boundaries and is way too sympathetic to refuse to help him. It gets worse when you realize their significant age and size gap, as Dolores is just a 1.60 meter tall 17 year old teenager and he's an almost 2 meter tall 43 year old man, which is why Dolores has no romantic interest in him and is feeling overwhelmed with his constant emotional breakdowns. She also feels in debt with him as Herman helps her during a crucial moment and he gave his apparent friendship during her loneliest times, so she think she must stay by his side.

At some point she ends up leaving him when she realizes he wants to marry her. He, eventually, doesn't die as he claims he would, but he won't make things easier for her. 

At some point she meets another man who is closer to her age and is a better partner for her.


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