Sever by @FireyWolve (Dual Qyrineg)
This poem's from one of my character's point of view, Slit.
They both have weird names, yadda yadda, but it has reasoning behind it that I don't want to go over here.
Yes, he likes another guy and yes the other guy sever likes blood.
But for me, a lot of feelings come through in this poem and it matches Slit great, expecially for rhyming. THe only problem is I made it kinda vague so some may not pick up on the fact that Sever's blind.
Well, whatever, that's it.
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