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Short of Perfection
Short of Perfection by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My 36th submission to DYOS VI.

D'hoy! And silly ol' me thought I should rein him in! I'm just too cautious for my own good!

Poor Perfectionist; I don't even know if he knows about DYOS to begin with.

Rise of Nations © Big Huge Games. Special holiday guest appearances by CFC moderators Chieftess, Duke of Marlbrough, Rik Meleet, and sysadmin Thunderfall.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt May 2013.]

Category:
Serial Artwork (Comics)
Rating:
Mature (VO)
Class:
Finished Work
Submitted:
1y196d ago
Tags:
DRAW Your Own Story DYOS 6 Thorvald of Lym Bjørn Manfred von Richtofen (DYOS) German Nazi pirate Battle Rise of Nations GIS syndrome machinomics digital comic mixed media
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