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shane grass

shadow on my back
shadow on my back by @callmedoc (shane grass)

I can feel the burden press down my back Until I can feel no more and here my spine crack I hate living but I hate more being dead Because every day there is a something wrong inside my head There is a shadow that hides behind my eyes and many more casting out their forsaken cries

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Fantasy
Rating:
Everyone
Class:
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