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Velasa Akutenshi

Only One- text version
Only One- text version by @Velasa (Velasa Akutenshi)

The text version of "Only One".

I actually found the lyrics by accident- I was listening to another song on the cd, and this came on after it. There's a slight change in the lyrics- in the original the first three lines read-

"She's got a pretty smile It covers up the poison that she hides She walks around in circles in my head"

I changed the three 'she' to 'you', and everything else was kept the same.

Artwork © Copyright 2002 Velasa -san

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