The girl who changed everything
The girl who changed everything by @Trezce (Lev)

The first part of my comic starts almost the same in both of the versions I'm making, except that in the timeline I'm posting here,at the beggining appears this page. The main character is thinking about everyone she loves and among this people is this girl, a simple lady who has no magic powers, who is not remarkably strong, fast, brave or smart, for some people she's not even considered beautiful, yet, she's one of the kindest and sweetest people around and said kindness has an impact on the heart of the protagonist.

She's an unremarkable individual who still made such a significant difference that it lead to a whole alternative story just for her and the main character. In another timeline, this girl is completely absent and said part is being posted on Domotown and Faneo (in the latter the comic is in Spanish). There will be still a happy ending, just a different one from this route.

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50d15h ago
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